Editor's Note: I had a lot of fun with this. Not just the inclusion of the In Your Hands theme song, but in honoring the way Lucy works and going old school with a hosted rp.
Post by Gabriel Baal on Aug 19, 2017 16:34:15 GMT -5
So, I have no problem with linked RP's. They're a throwback to a time where Geocities was the fucking nuts. But for me? The consistent need to click to move on became a little annoying.
To be fair, that takes nothing away from your content. I learnt more about your character through this piece than I have anything you've written thus far. That may sound like a sleight - it's not. That's the sign of a great PPV RP. Given the fact that this is your first attempt at gold here in UGWC, you've shown no sign of nerves.
I really enjoyed what you wrote this week. I've enjoyed what you've brought - great job.
Current:
Former:
2 x World Heavyweight Champion 2 x Cross Hemisphere Champion 1 x Chaos Champion 3 x Cooperative Champion 1 x (And First Undefeated) Conquest Champion 1 x Global Challenge Winner 1 x Massive Melee Winner 1 x Lord of Trios Winner
Post by Lord Hastings on Aug 20, 2017 23:38:45 GMT -5
Last year I wrote a RP that had an endless loop of clicks, I won't be throwing stones from my glass house.
I neglected to mention this in my feedz to Barbie so I'll just say it here for both of you, I liked how both of you worked in the stip in your respective posts, yours obviously much more subtle, but I think it was clever the way you worked it in.
Sarah has been a ton of fun and it's hard to believe you have only been here for less than two months! Good luck!
Post by Eden Morgan on Aug 21, 2017 5:06:21 GMT -5
I have to echo what Steve said above and say it really is pretty amazing that you've only been around a couple months and this is where we are with Sarah. She's definitely a flamboyant, interesting character and I appreciate that we seemed to learn more about her and delve more deeply into her psyche than we really ever have before. There's a lot of facets to her and that's something I particularly enjoy, a well-rounded character. This feud between you and Lucy has been one to watch and quite enjoyable. Can't wait to see the result. Good luck!
First Female World Champ (4x) First Female Grand Slam Champ Massive Melee winner 2013/14 High Roller's winner 2014 Cooperative Champ w/Zane Scott Cooperative Champ w/Gabriel Baal Cooperative Champ w/ Jet Somers Cooperative Champ w/ Donovan Hastings Cross-Hemisphere Champ, IYH 2016 Chaos Champ, BG 2017
Post by Jet Somers on Aug 21, 2017 22:10:49 GMT -5
Lucy vs Sarah may be my most highly anticipated match to read at this PPV, no offense to anyone else. You've both worked diligently to build the hype, and it's going to be a pleasure to watch it unfold.
One thing I appreciate about SSL is that she came ready made with a complex story, and you have made her slot right in as if she's been here all along. She's extremely unique in a game where uniqueness is hard to find. Good luck!
World (4) CH (1) Chaos (2) CoOp (7) GIW Hardcore Champion PPW Paramount Champion Battleground 2011 Outlast 2014 IYH House Finalist 2015 MVP 2011 Best Collaboration 2012-13
So, I have no problem with linked RP's. They're a throwback to a time where Geocities was the fucking nuts. But for me? The consistent need to click to move on became a little annoying.
To be fair, that takes nothing away from your content. I learnt more about your character through this piece than I have anything you've written thus far. That may sound like a sleight - it's not. That's the sign of a great PPV RP. Given the fact that this is your first attempt at gold here in UGWC, you've shown no sign of nerves.
I really enjoyed what you wrote this week. I've enjoyed what you've brought - great job.
So that you and I are clear, Sir:
Should we even have a one-on-one match, I will make you click so many damn links that you will only get halfway through the read!
So, I have no problem with linked RP's. They're a throwback to a time where Geocities was the fucking nuts. But for me? The consistent need to click to move on became a little annoying.
To be fair, that takes nothing away from your content. I learnt more about your character through this piece than I have anything you've written thus far. That may sound like a sleight - it's not. That's the sign of a great PPV RP. Given the fact that this is your first attempt at gold here in UGWC, you've shown no sign of nerves.
I really enjoyed what you wrote this week. I've enjoyed what you've brought - great job.
So that you and I are clear, Sir:
Should we even have a one-on-one match, I will make you click so many damn links that you will only get halfway through the read!
You better accept that challenge, Mike.
World (4) CH (1) Chaos (2) CoOp (7) GIW Hardcore Champion PPW Paramount Champion Battleground 2011 Outlast 2014 IYH House Finalist 2015 MVP 2011 Best Collaboration 2012-13
So, I have no problem with linked RP's. They're a throwback to a time where Geocities was the fucking nuts. But for me? The consistent need to click to move on became a little annoying.
To be fair, that takes nothing away from your content. I learnt more about your character through this piece than I have anything you've written thus far. That may sound like a sleight - it's not. That's the sign of a great PPV RP. Given the fact that this is your first attempt at gold here in UGWC, you've shown no sign of nerves.
I really enjoyed what you wrote this week. I've enjoyed what you've brought - great job.
So that you and I are clear, Sir:
Should we even have a one-on-one match, I will make you click so many damn links that you will only get halfway through the read!
I will totally outdo you...
It wasn't a dig by the way. It just distracted me from what was an excellent piece of writing.
Current:
Former:
2 x World Heavyweight Champion 2 x Cross Hemisphere Champion 1 x Chaos Champion 3 x Cooperative Champion 1 x (And First Undefeated) Conquest Champion 1 x Global Challenge Winner 1 x Massive Melee Winner 1 x Lord of Trios Winner