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[LACKLAN]

So! I am well aware that hosted rps are a thing of the past, but the stip for the match made me want to do something I haven't done in a long time.

I hope you guys enjoy this.

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[The Circle Television Network]

Super innovative use of the match stip, in my opinion. I also enjoyed the varied points of view because that shows a lot of range and depth.

If there is a draw back at all, its that Bordy's connections run so deep that not everyone is always in on what is going on. I don't really think that's a dig, if anything that just goes to show how well developed the character is.

Clicking links is annoying, but I think that it was a pretty witty way to go and it made me feel like I was actively going through the history of the character(s).

[Roxy Cotton]

This is honestly just brilliant, imo. When I read the stip I tried to think of ways I could make it work... this was something that didn't even occur to me. Really creative. Instead of the stipulation hindering you, you made it work for you.

However, geocities rules, angelfire drools

[angelicavaughn]

Great work! You turned Bordy from what I initally presumed to be a placeholder charrie (all those months ago) into a legitimate powerhouse of a character. You worked the stip beau-ti-fully. Such creativity, and isn't that what this championship is all about in the first place?
'You outdid yourelf with this one' is a phrase I've said once too many by now. In the end, and as a result, excellence is something I've come to expect of you. I'm glad my silly character is allowed to be a part of the deep and rich world you've created.

[Lord Hastings]

This was really creative. It's something that could easily come off as gimmicky, but a stipulation like this was really the perfect spot to do it because it fit very naturally.

I think you've done a great job of establishing yourself as someone who is going to set the bar high for a stip match. Bordy is setting a standard for the Chaos division, particularly under its new parameters, that is going to be very difficult for future champions to follow.