Post by Rogan MacLean on Sept 19, 2021 11:18:44 GMT -5
I’m sure that I’ve said this entirely too much, but your description is so good. It really draws me into your scene and atmosphere. Putting an Astro Creep spin on Dr. Suess was also cryptic and an unsettling use of the match stip (in a good way). You turned Seb’s comment about Montague not impressing from a cycle or two ago, and turned it in on itself. You executed that very well. Adding the music to it fit in and added more dimension to the entire piece. I particularly enjoyed the second song. Montague’s growing discomfort while shooting on Seb is funny, too. After reading both pieces, I feel like you both put out high quality work.
I’m going to say this part to both of you: A match between you two, opening up Synergy for the Chaos Championship is a treat. It’s like having the main event of a PPV world title match opening the show. That’s something both of you should be proud of, as writers. And you both delivered.
Looooooooooooved it. My word I probably said it before but I'll say it again, I do like me some Montague! Your descriptive work still is just...what's the word? Incredible? Amazing? Tremendous? I look forward each week to the layers you add my friend!!! You rock!
