Post by T-Robosaurus Rex on Feb 18, 2024 15:54:37 GMT -5
Those who know me, know I lvoe what I call a 'concept' post, and your movie bits hit that spot really well for me, a great way of getting points and observations across without just resorting to trash talking and shoots, it's a skill I respect and appreciate a great deal.
And I also enjoyed the directness of your shoot. I'm not always a fan of just talk at a camera style shoots, but mixed with the concepts of your pieces it's a good balance, everything feels relevant to what's going on around you in the fed and I appreciate the mix. You also display a good understanding of your opponents and it is very clear you pay attention to more than just what's going on inside the Matt Knox bubble, another trait I respect and admire.
Really enjoyed this.
Hanson: "May Roberts' soul go to a better place, free of chunky Asians, who do flips."
Post by Gideon Thornfield on Feb 18, 2024 19:18:16 GMT -5
This had creativity in its setting, character development, and plot twists. You introduced unique elements like the high-stakes poker tournament and the presence of the Consortium.
The interaction between the characters, particularly between Matthew Knox and Larry Tact, reveals layers of complexity and depth.
There's a good balance of exposition, tension, and character interaction, certainly kept me interested and invested in the story!
You maintain a well-paced structure, effectively transitioning between scenes and maintaining momentum throughout. The use of scene breaks and shifts in perspective helps to keep the story engaging and cohesive.
We can easily visualize the opulent hotel, the tense atmosphere of the poker tournament, and the chaotic scenes of confrontation and escape.
The conflict between Matthew Knox and Larry Tact is central to the narrative, and their interactions drive the story forward. The resolution leaves room for future developments while providing a satisfying conclusion to the immediate conflict.