Post by T-Robosaurus Rex on Feb 18, 2024 17:10:35 GMT -5
I have thoroughly enjoyed catching up with SEB and Lucy over the past couple of weeks. I think I said it to Mike in a private message, but it bears repeating, reading your work made me realise the level I'd like to get back to....and just how far I have to go to get back.
Effortlessly mixing character development, story and match relevance.
Dialogue that is sharp, witty and engaging.
Entwining your 'shoot' work into natural, every day conversation.
You both do a fantastic job of covering all the bases I admire and respect. There is humour, without just being flippant and irrelevant, there is depth without being overbearing and self-indulgent, and there is fantastic relationship building that feels real and organic.
Also every time it's a prime example of what an optimal cooperative team should be, in my opinion. Both your voices are clear and individual, but come together to make one great unit.
I feel I may have given you too much praise so I must criticise something, cause you're both too good to just be showered in praise.
I hate clicking through to another site to read, you're making me do extra work and I'm lazy (I know it's in vogue and there are probably lots of very reasonable explanations and justifications for it, but I'm still going to moan at you, with absolutely no expectation that you will, or should have to, change it. Cause that's what I'm like).
Secondly, I'm with SEB, far too much insight into Eden Morgan's sex life for me, thank you very much! (But it was nice to see another familiar face and that vicious tongue again regardless).
It's not hard to see why both of you are some of the very best that ever graced the boards of UGWC.
Hanson: "May Roberts' soul go to a better place, free of chunky Asians, who do flips."
Post by Gideon Thornfield on Feb 18, 2024 21:33:37 GMT -5
The scene maintains engagement through dialogue-driven exchanges and interpersonal conflict, however, pacing issues and occasional repetition cause it to drag at times.
The dialogue and actions effectively reveal aspects of their personalities and relationships, such as Seb's frustration, Lucy's concern, and Eden's blunt demeanor.
The strength of the roleplay lies in its well-crafted dialogue, which drives character development and plot progression.
