Post by T-Robosaurus Rex on Feb 18, 2024 17:22:13 GMT -5
In this game we get a lot of 'Extreme' characters that are meant to be dangerous, unhinged etc etc etc, and generally it's all the same.
That's not the case with your writing of Trent, I can genuinely believe he is more than just ruthless, I can vividly picture his scars and the awful things he has done, and had done to him. The voice you have perfected with him makes him stand out as a genuinely dangerous person.
Obviously I don't agree with Trent's views on UGWC, but I 100% believe that he feels that way and it is the truth of his reality.
Hopefully it takes Trent a long time to destroy UGWC because I hope I'm going to get to see a lot more of him here.
(Oh and man am I old now, had to zoom in a lot to not need reading glasses!)
Hanson: "May Roberts' soul go to a better place, free of chunky Asians, who do flips."
Post by Gideon Thornfield on Feb 18, 2024 22:36:20 GMT -5
The dialogue between Trent Steel and Tanya Hernandez does a good job of exploring their personal history and emotional depth. They are well-developed characters with distinct personalities and backgrounds.
You used descriptive language to vividly depict settings, emotions, and character actions. It effectively conveys the atmosphere of Trent's loft apartment and captures the nuances of his emotional state.
You effectively addressed the themes of identity, regret, and redemption through Trent Steel's introspective reflections and interactions with Tanya.
