Post by Montana on Aug 14, 2009 17:23:57 GMT -5
(When the scene opens up the camera is focused on a man sitting at a desk and writing something down. The man is in a office his desk is piled with paper and he looks tired as if he doesn’t want to be there, suddenly the door opens and a man who is at least in his 50’s walks in the man walks over to his desks and begins to speak.)
“Hey tanner when your done wasting your time with that case you can look at this.”
(The man puts a VHS tape and a file on tanners desk.)
“These guys went in and out they hit the registers and didn’t even touch the vault it was all perfect until one of them shot the bank teller in the face. See what you can find. And I better not catch you working on the Brooks case anymore I already told you, get over it.”
(The man walks out of the room.)
“Yes sir captain I will get right on it. Asshole.”
(Tanner grabs the file and opens it he begins to read it out load in a very low voice.)
“On July 27th five men went into a bank of America and stole over1500 dollars in cash they shot a female bank teller in the face she was survived by her husband and two sons. They were seen leaving in a red Ford Taurus with dealer plates. With the help of the dealer ship we were able to trace the car back to a man named Manuel Alvarez but when we went to his home all we could find was his corpse and a very low amount of cocaine. We ran an autopsy on him and the results came back to being murder we can assume he was a sleep while he was killed because there were no defense wounds.”
(Tanner grabs the video tape and inserts it into a VCR beside his desks he turns on the T.V. and begins to watch the bank robbery, The men rush in and spread out one of them gets all of the civilians on the right and another one on the left one of the men goes over to the female bank teller and puts his gun in her face she hesitates to do what he says and before she can do anything he shoots her. The two other suspects were harassing one of the employees to give them the key for the vault they were distracted by the gun shot instead of going for the vault they go over to the cash registers and grab the money they rush out of the bank and the tape finishes. The camera zooms out of the television and focuses on Tanner again he grabs the phones receiver and dials for numbers.)
“Hey captain I just finished watching the tape and you said that they didn’t go for the vaults but they did they what stopped them was the gunshot and instead they just grabbed the money from the register. Also one of the suspects is a friend of mine I have known him since high school I have to go find him captain…… Jack I cant let you do that if he is your friend then I’m taking you off of this case.”
(Jack hangs up the phone and stands up from his desks he puts on his coat and begins to walk out of the door the camera zooms into the back off his jacket which says FBI the scene fades to black with the camera zoomed In on these letters,)
(When the scene opens back up we find ourselves outside with Anthony and Robert both of them staring at something, the expression on both their faces is an expression of shock as if they are seeing something horrifying the camera pans around to reveal what they are looking at and we can see the trans am.
Smashed windows, slashed tires and broken mirrors the body of the car is dented and the leather interior is all torn the steering wheel is missing and so are the T-tops his car stereo is also missing.)
“Wow they really gave her a beating and they stole her clothes.”
“So your trying to be funny now, my car is a disaster and your making jokes.”
“Yeah I know blah blah blah, who ever did this really doesn’t like you, damn they messed the car up, they even stole your steering now that’s fucked up, why aren’t you crying?”
“Why am I not crying? I’m crying, on the inside, I don’t know what to do anymore my life went from not so bad to a shit storm. I don’t even know if this is real I cant take this anymore.”
“Quit bitching your acting like a girl, this is all the way of life you have to go through things like this, I think.”
“You think? What do you mean you think?”
“How am I supposed to know I haven’t lived my full life yet why don’t you go ask somebody who isn’t unemployed. What are you going too do with the car?”
“Well the only thing I can do is repair it, although this car is jinxed since the day I’ve got this car its been trying to kill me I should just get rid of it but just like Christine I’m going to die in it.”
“Okay I have to head out like I said I’m unemployed and I need a job.”
“Here you go 10bucks for gas, and I better not see you on the news.”
“Thanks ill be back soon, hey do you need a ride anywhere you know since your car is kind of trashed?”
“No dick ill be taking the bus today thanks anyways.”
(Anthony walks over to his 96 Chevy Impala, He takes off and the camera follows him not soon before getting on the road a white Ford Crown Victoria begins to follow Anthony’s car. Anthony drives down a couple of blocks before the cop flashes his sirens signaling him to pull over Anthony pulls into a convenience store and parks, the Crown Vic parks directly behind Anthony in order to stop him from trying to drive away. The officer begins to speak over the intercom)
“Turn off the car you dumb motherfucker! Open the door and step out slowly, make one wrong move and ill blow your fucking head off! Put your hands on top of your head. Now I want you to slowly back up and put your hands on the hood do it slowly motherfucker I’m watching you.”
(Anthony steps back and once he is too the hood the cop who is know identified as Jack Tanner walks up too him and doesn’t put handcuffs on him instead he pulls out the same file he had earlier and drops it on the hood of the car.”
“So Montana your robbing banks now? That’s a great change of pace you went from oil refinery’s to banks, why?”
(Anthony looks up from the hood of the car he looks at the man he looks at him for a while before realizing that he knows him.)
“Jack what are you doing man, you’re a cop now?”
“No I’m an FBI agent get it straight dirtbag.”
“Well why are you fucking with me? Let me guess, this isn’t a coincidence.”
“No it isn’t, get in your car and follow me to this diner up the road we can catch up there.”
(The scene fades to Robert entering a bus he sits down in the front row and across from him is an older man at least in his sixty’s and beside him is a young boy, the young boy being his grandson.)
“How are you doing sir?”
“I’m fine, how are you?”
“Well I’m not so good, my life is falling apart and I’m seeing things Its not the life I wished for.”
“Well son I know a little bit about that myself, see the thing is my wife and daughter died in a car accident leaving me to take car of my grandson here. And his deadbeat father never was there for him in the first place I don’t know how anybody could go through with leaving there own child it makes me sick, I thought I wasn’t going to make it I even tried to commit suicide but then I realized that my grandson probably feels the same way and he never gave up so why should I, every morning I wake and think about how our life’s could have been better if it wasn’t for that drunken son of a bitch.”
“Wow that’s pretty messed up and I thought my life was bad. My father did abandon me as a child and its not a good feeling.”
“So what do you do.”
“I’m a professional wrestler.”
“How is that going?”
“I really don’t know my life has been so mixed up in things I cant concentrate on what my main objective is.”
“So do you at least know who your wrestling next.”[/color
"I'm wrestling William Everynight for the GIW.com Championship."
“It’s William Everknight dumb ass get it right.”
(The grandson curses at Rob for not saying the name right.)
“Wow I didn’t realize Will had so many fans, although it seems to me that all his fans are little kids, he gains the fans and Ark rapes them quite the system he’s got going on there.So where are you heading sir?”
“Me and my grandson are going to by some school supplies, school will be in soon and I want him to be prepared.”
“Wow summer is over already. I didn’t catch your name sir what was it.”
“I’m Steve Montana”
“Robert Montana good to meet you. Wait what did you say your last name was?”
“Montana.”
“Did you say your father left you when you were a kid.”
“Holy shit” (Both)
“What was your mothers name?”
“Her name was Angela.”
“Oh my god.”
(Steve has a heart attack he falls off of his seat and lands on the floor all of the other passengers begin to panic the scene fades to Anthony and Jack sitting in a diner having a conversation.)
“What I want to know is how did the guy who was like the biggest thief in the damn school become an FBI agent.”
“I don’t know man I guess I just grew up you know it was either this or jail.”
“So do you have any kids?”
“Yeah we recently adopted one.”
“Well that’s nice. So jack lets cut the crap because we all know that you’re here for one reason only, either your gonna arrest me or bullshit me I have things to do.”
“Well I know that was you at the bank you committed a crime you need to pay for what you did that’s just the way of life you know.”
“You owe me one Jack remember when you vandalized that school huh who tool the blame for it? Me I did that’s one year ill never get back from my life and this is how you repay me.”
“ okay well I guess now you owe me one, go get the hell out of here, now.”
(Anthony rushes out of the diner and into his car he takes off leaving tire marks on the parking lot pavement. The scene fades to black.)
“Hey tanner when your done wasting your time with that case you can look at this.”
(The man puts a VHS tape and a file on tanners desk.)
“These guys went in and out they hit the registers and didn’t even touch the vault it was all perfect until one of them shot the bank teller in the face. See what you can find. And I better not catch you working on the Brooks case anymore I already told you, get over it.”
(The man walks out of the room.)
“Yes sir captain I will get right on it. Asshole.”
(Tanner grabs the file and opens it he begins to read it out load in a very low voice.)
“On July 27th five men went into a bank of America and stole over1500 dollars in cash they shot a female bank teller in the face she was survived by her husband and two sons. They were seen leaving in a red Ford Taurus with dealer plates. With the help of the dealer ship we were able to trace the car back to a man named Manuel Alvarez but when we went to his home all we could find was his corpse and a very low amount of cocaine. We ran an autopsy on him and the results came back to being murder we can assume he was a sleep while he was killed because there were no defense wounds.”
(Tanner grabs the video tape and inserts it into a VCR beside his desks he turns on the T.V. and begins to watch the bank robbery, The men rush in and spread out one of them gets all of the civilians on the right and another one on the left one of the men goes over to the female bank teller and puts his gun in her face she hesitates to do what he says and before she can do anything he shoots her. The two other suspects were harassing one of the employees to give them the key for the vault they were distracted by the gun shot instead of going for the vault they go over to the cash registers and grab the money they rush out of the bank and the tape finishes. The camera zooms out of the television and focuses on Tanner again he grabs the phones receiver and dials for numbers.)
“Hey captain I just finished watching the tape and you said that they didn’t go for the vaults but they did they what stopped them was the gunshot and instead they just grabbed the money from the register. Also one of the suspects is a friend of mine I have known him since high school I have to go find him captain…… Jack I cant let you do that if he is your friend then I’m taking you off of this case.”
(Jack hangs up the phone and stands up from his desks he puts on his coat and begins to walk out of the door the camera zooms into the back off his jacket which says FBI the scene fades to black with the camera zoomed In on these letters,)
(When the scene opens back up we find ourselves outside with Anthony and Robert both of them staring at something, the expression on both their faces is an expression of shock as if they are seeing something horrifying the camera pans around to reveal what they are looking at and we can see the trans am.
Smashed windows, slashed tires and broken mirrors the body of the car is dented and the leather interior is all torn the steering wheel is missing and so are the T-tops his car stereo is also missing.)
“Wow they really gave her a beating and they stole her clothes.”
“So your trying to be funny now, my car is a disaster and your making jokes.”
“Yeah I know blah blah blah, who ever did this really doesn’t like you, damn they messed the car up, they even stole your steering now that’s fucked up, why aren’t you crying?”
“Why am I not crying? I’m crying, on the inside, I don’t know what to do anymore my life went from not so bad to a shit storm. I don’t even know if this is real I cant take this anymore.”
“Quit bitching your acting like a girl, this is all the way of life you have to go through things like this, I think.”
“You think? What do you mean you think?”
“How am I supposed to know I haven’t lived my full life yet why don’t you go ask somebody who isn’t unemployed. What are you going too do with the car?”
“Well the only thing I can do is repair it, although this car is jinxed since the day I’ve got this car its been trying to kill me I should just get rid of it but just like Christine I’m going to die in it.”
“Okay I have to head out like I said I’m unemployed and I need a job.”
“Here you go 10bucks for gas, and I better not see you on the news.”
“Thanks ill be back soon, hey do you need a ride anywhere you know since your car is kind of trashed?”
“No dick ill be taking the bus today thanks anyways.”
(Anthony walks over to his 96 Chevy Impala, He takes off and the camera follows him not soon before getting on the road a white Ford Crown Victoria begins to follow Anthony’s car. Anthony drives down a couple of blocks before the cop flashes his sirens signaling him to pull over Anthony pulls into a convenience store and parks, the Crown Vic parks directly behind Anthony in order to stop him from trying to drive away. The officer begins to speak over the intercom)
“Turn off the car you dumb motherfucker! Open the door and step out slowly, make one wrong move and ill blow your fucking head off! Put your hands on top of your head. Now I want you to slowly back up and put your hands on the hood do it slowly motherfucker I’m watching you.”
(Anthony steps back and once he is too the hood the cop who is know identified as Jack Tanner walks up too him and doesn’t put handcuffs on him instead he pulls out the same file he had earlier and drops it on the hood of the car.”
“So Montana your robbing banks now? That’s a great change of pace you went from oil refinery’s to banks, why?”
(Anthony looks up from the hood of the car he looks at the man he looks at him for a while before realizing that he knows him.)
“Jack what are you doing man, you’re a cop now?”
“No I’m an FBI agent get it straight dirtbag.”
“Well why are you fucking with me? Let me guess, this isn’t a coincidence.”
“No it isn’t, get in your car and follow me to this diner up the road we can catch up there.”
(The scene fades to Robert entering a bus he sits down in the front row and across from him is an older man at least in his sixty’s and beside him is a young boy, the young boy being his grandson.)
“How are you doing sir?”
“I’m fine, how are you?”
“Well I’m not so good, my life is falling apart and I’m seeing things Its not the life I wished for.”
“Well son I know a little bit about that myself, see the thing is my wife and daughter died in a car accident leaving me to take car of my grandson here. And his deadbeat father never was there for him in the first place I don’t know how anybody could go through with leaving there own child it makes me sick, I thought I wasn’t going to make it I even tried to commit suicide but then I realized that my grandson probably feels the same way and he never gave up so why should I, every morning I wake and think about how our life’s could have been better if it wasn’t for that drunken son of a bitch.”
“Wow that’s pretty messed up and I thought my life was bad. My father did abandon me as a child and its not a good feeling.”
“So what do you do.”
“I’m a professional wrestler.”
“How is that going?”
“I really don’t know my life has been so mixed up in things I cant concentrate on what my main objective is.”
“So do you at least know who your wrestling next.”[/color
"I'm wrestling William Everynight for the GIW.com Championship."
“It’s William Everknight dumb ass get it right.”
(The grandson curses at Rob for not saying the name right.)
“Wow I didn’t realize Will had so many fans, although it seems to me that all his fans are little kids, he gains the fans and Ark rapes them quite the system he’s got going on there.So where are you heading sir?”
“Me and my grandson are going to by some school supplies, school will be in soon and I want him to be prepared.”
“Wow summer is over already. I didn’t catch your name sir what was it.”
“I’m Steve Montana”
“Robert Montana good to meet you. Wait what did you say your last name was?”
“Montana.”
“Did you say your father left you when you were a kid.”
“Holy shit” (Both)
“What was your mothers name?”
“Her name was Angela.”
“Oh my god.”
(Steve has a heart attack he falls off of his seat and lands on the floor all of the other passengers begin to panic the scene fades to Anthony and Jack sitting in a diner having a conversation.)
“What I want to know is how did the guy who was like the biggest thief in the damn school become an FBI agent.”
“I don’t know man I guess I just grew up you know it was either this or jail.”
“So do you have any kids?”
“Yeah we recently adopted one.”
“Well that’s nice. So jack lets cut the crap because we all know that you’re here for one reason only, either your gonna arrest me or bullshit me I have things to do.”
“Well I know that was you at the bank you committed a crime you need to pay for what you did that’s just the way of life you know.”
“You owe me one Jack remember when you vandalized that school huh who tool the blame for it? Me I did that’s one year ill never get back from my life and this is how you repay me.”
“ okay well I guess now you owe me one, go get the hell out of here, now.”
(Anthony rushes out of the diner and into his car he takes off leaving tire marks on the parking lot pavement. The scene fades to black.)