Championship Wrestling from Alaska promo

[Ezekiel Pax]

A few words with Brody Adams. This is my promo towards Calvin James. We fight this Saturday in the finals of a tournament to crown a new champion after the best was vacated she to injury. Enjoy. Or not. Feedback is appreciated.

A Few Words..: youtu.be/iPXUM-Mm7Oo

[>V<]

You say "but" too much, and it would have been nice to see Brody admit which sin he's guilty of. Aside from that, and the fact that it seems a bit rushed at times, I think it's a nice little piece of promo work. I miss those sometimes.

[Ezekiel Pax]

It's a slow burn storyline as far as the sins go. Mine will eventually be revealed.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely pay more attention to it.